Thursday, January 29, 2009

Recent Work

Yes.. I know I know.. I will catch up when I can.

But for today, I would like to share the most recent article I have been working on (in tomorrow's Technician).

Preface*

Generally when my Editor's change my article, I fume and call them idiots. I mean.. I wrote it.

But today, I make an exception. While in several spots, the sentence structure becomes a little awkward (notably in paragraph 1 and 2) -- the article as a whole was significantly improved. Not by changing any one word in the article, but by altering the sentence positioning. Hats off Jane, you one up-ed my own article.

I hope you enjoy.. the article.

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